Ain’t nobody ever gonna like a poem that uses the word “Plasma”
You lost me at “plasma”
Let’s all go ahead and cross “plasma” off of the list of words that work in poems.
Plasma is kind of like a swear word, except more obviously terrible. It’s as if “moist” and the c-word had a baby, and made you think about donating fluids. All while relaxing w/ blog poetry.
I loved the part where he was talking about whipping himself a lot, and said you were “in anger” with someone. I dig it. Oh also you LEGIT wrote about choking fetish for three solid scroll-lengths. Can relate.
But then you said “plasma”,
and the curtain dropped.
Hello, mr. Oz.
I dare you to prove me wrong.
Now for my mic drop…